Task 41 - Pitch Feedback

Peer and Teacher Feedback

Teacher feedback - what needs to be improved:

- Post location photos

- Be clear about how film appeals to the audience 

- Post evidence of Se7en audience research

- Spell check

Peer feedback - what went well:

- Descriptive points - prepared, not reading off the board

- Music went well with the plot - clear idea of the plot

- Went into detail about props and mise-en-scene

- Developed storyboard

What needs to be improved:

- Spell check 

- Type of title sequence - narrative or discrete?

- How would your film attract your audience?